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=E. Conclusion (100-150 words) Tips]= In conclusion, my grandmothers may have only stated certain moments which they remembered because logically they could have not remembered everything. But was what they remembered completemy reliable. Someone who has been through something like that may only remember the moments HE/SHE wants to remember and maybe not the key points, which is not a mistake it is just a very normal thing to do afterall. SO we can maybe not beliefe these sources one hundred percent, but we can certainly consider them, we can certainly imagine this had happened, and that it is very raelistic.

b. Lose the capital letters - this is not the correct formal way to write. c. You rely too heavily on points about oral testimony being reliable/unreliable; you need to reach a CONCLUSION about what is specifically correct / incorrect, based on your WIDER READING (which of course doesn't exist at the moment)**
 * a. run this through a grammar / spell checker.